Yes I got it, and was crammed down with work. Terribly sorry for not replying to you. For various reasons your illustration was hard to talk about, so I hesitated on whether or not I should give you feedback, and it ended up further and further down in my mailbox.
I'll send you some thoughts tomorrow, and you can decide for yourself if it is helpful enough to pay for. It is an uncommon kind of illustration.
Don't worry about giving me critique if your not sure I should pay. I just thought you said if you can help with it you'll let me know and if I want I can then pay for the critique.
Maybe you can't say much about it or tell me how to fix it if it's uncommon so probably leave it then for now. I might send something else down the track. just wanted to know where I could improve but wasn't sure if I should pay the 30$ dollars for the advice or not.